Actions from athanasiusMovable Type Pro 5.22013-06-16T11:49:33Zhttp://www.antipope.org/mt/mt-cp.cgi?__mode=feed&_type=actions&blog_id=1&id=2605Commented on Bit Rot in Charlie's Diarytag:www.antipope.org,2013:/charlie/blog-static//1.3623#14385242013-06-16T10:49:33Zathanasius
"Very few of us appreciated the true horror of what had happened; we fought it was just"
s/fought/thought/
"shuddering. "Ah. Lilith." It's skin was"
s/it's/its/
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Commented on Short Story: Bit Rot in Charlie's Diarytag:www.antipope.org,2013:/charlie/blog-static//1.3621#14385202013-06-16T10:46:24Zathanasius
Oh, I didn't realise until I reach the bottom that I could comment on the HTML version directly, two more copyedits there.
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Commented on Short Story: Bit Rot in Charlie's Diarytag:www.antipope.org,2013:/charlie/blog-static//1.3621#14385012013-06-16T10:24:47Zathanasius
At least in the HTML version you have
"You, Lamashtu, and I, Lilith, worked out butts off and bought our way into the Lansford Hastings"