I'd never wondered before about why no one ever sees the tooth fairy - great question, good source of nightmares for children!
Minor formatting issue: "Flytrap skipped forward into the doorway" (page 343 of 378 in Kindle edition) - shouldn't this have a paragraph break before, rather than running straight on from previous sentence? We've been with Mary/Del/GB in the corridor, but with this sentence we switch back to the Terrortots in the chapel. Mary/Del/GB don't enter the chapel until 3 pages later.
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