
athanasius
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Commented on Bit Rot
"Very few of us appreciated the true horror of what had happened; we fought it was just" s/fought/thought/ "shuddering. "Ah. Lilith." It's skin was" s/it's/its/...
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Commented on Short Story: Bit Rot
Oh, I didn't realise until I reach the bottom that I could comment on the HTML version directly, two more copyedits there....
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Commented on Short Story: Bit Rot
At least in the HTML version you have "You, Lamashtu, and I, Lilith, worked out butts off and bought our way into the Lansford Hastings" s/out/our/...
